Today ,I and myself readed this funny story it is written by this amazing person his name is Kyle Mewburn.You guys should read it I think you’re going to smile and laugh.It has lots of detail it's funny as you thought.And it’s about his auntie getting to kiss him every time.But what happened in the end he decided to loved her grand aunt because she fell on her leg.You guys will like to read it he’s grandma’s name is Elsie.
Thanks readers
I am a Year 4 learner at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Mrs Sharma.
Showing posts with label 2017. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2017. Show all posts
Thursday, November 30, 2017
Wednesday, November 29, 2017
Friday, November 24, 2017
Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Tuesday, November 21, 2017
Athletics day-number 2
This is my recount on Athletics day after receiving feedback from my peers.
’’Hi Alrida’’said Maria ‘‘Hi’’ I politely said to Maria.’’What house are you in’’asked Maria oh I’m in Tobruk.
After the 8 years old’s racing it was time for the 9 years old.’’Ahhh’’I don’t want to have a race my tummy was full of butterflies.
‘‘Wow its really hot outside here’’I whispered to myself.Miss Arieen said if I blow the whistle you run fast as you can.
1, 2 ,3 ‘’Go said Ms Arieen wait come back let’s do it again “She taught us 1,2,3 go.I was chilling when Ms Arieen yelled at me and the 9 years old girls face .I came 1rd and a girl from Room 7 came 2th I was proud for myself and my house.
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Thursday, November 9, 2017
Friday, July 28, 2017
My recount
I went to the park and play with some friends that I just met.My auntie was on facebook watching photos of my grandma.When I finished playing at the park it was time for me to go back home and sleep for school.But first I have to read a story and pray first before I go to sleep which I did it.
By- Alrida
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