Athletics day-number 2

This is my recount on Athletics day after receiving feedback from my peers.

’’Hi Alrida’’said Maria ‘‘Hi’’ I politely said to Maria.’’What house are you in’’asked Maria oh I’m in Tobruk.

After  the 8 years old’s racing it was time for the 9 years old.’’Ahhh’’I don’t want to have a race my tummy was full of butterflies.

‘‘Wow its really hot outside here’’I whispered to myself.Miss Arieen said if I blow the whistle you run fast as you can.

1, 2 ,3  ‘’Go said Ms Arieen wait come back let’s do it again “She taught us 1,2,3 go.I was chilling when Ms Arieen yelled at me and the 9 years old girls face .I came 1rd and a girl from Room 7 came 2th I was proud for myself and my house.